Fiddle with your render settings, you might be able to crank out quite a bit more brightness without overly lighting your final render. You could also do this post comp, too.
Other than that, awesome job.

Another essential classic!

Essential to watch!! :D

could have done without that last little part with the pancakes.

Amazing job here.

I rose from my grave when I heard this. Bang on Genesis sound.

A nice chill tune, for an after-rompin' cig, an after dusk driving montage, I could go on. 'tis groovy.

Too calm?! Do all songs have to be full of death, carnage, or hipster fuelled lyrics? No!
The songs perfect the way it is. If these people want Skrillex, then they should just go on iTunes.

Too much lensflare on the knife, other than that, perfect!

His shirt stands out a little open-spaced, but this is front pager, imo. great job with the exaggerated character style :)

Awesome job